Of my draft article, Performance & Politics, Gary H wrote: "The main things is you don't have an argumentative structure. You need to frame this much more. What is the overall argument you are trying to make? Once you've got that, then that will guide your analysis and the examples you use." AND: "Your argument needs to be driving this, not your life biography. But I don't know what your argument is. If it's about the political possibilities of experimental theatre, then you need to engage with the scholarship on those subjects, and let that structure your analysis - not just restrict your analysis to examples that you have personally experienced."
I guess he's right.
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